haiku

Posted on July 4, 2020 by joem18b

deer drink at midnight
from quiet brook with wolves near
at Stan’s, i’m the wolf

for The Sunday Muse

Filed under: Haiku, writing challenges, writing prompts | Tagged: , , |

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9 Responses

  1. Sherry Marr, on July 4, 2020 at 8:54 pm said:

    This is awesome. The twist in the last line really makes an impact.

    Reply
  2. Carrie V. H., on July 5, 2020 at 5:22 am said:

    Nice I like it! Great and clever haiku! Glad you joined us at the Muse!

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  3. Helen Dehner, on July 5, 2020 at 6:40 am said:

    A most unique and entertaining haiku!

    Reply
  4. wyndolynne, on July 5, 2020 at 6:46 am said:

    This sparks all the questions. 🙂 Wonderful.

    Reply
  5. Susie Clevenger, on July 6, 2020 at 12:28 pm said:

    I really enjoyed this one..especially how you ended it.

    Reply
  7. Petru, on July 8, 2020 at 5:32 am said:

    Happily surprised at the haiku. Everything is in it.

    Reply

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