haiku

deer drink at midnight
from quiet brook with wolves near
at Stan’s, i’m the wolf

for The Sunday Muse

9 Responses

  1. This is awesome. The twist in the last line really makes an impact.

  2. Nice I like it! Great and clever haiku! Glad you joined us at the Muse!

  3. A most unique and entertaining haiku!

  4. This sparks all the questions. 🙂 Wonderful.

  5. I really enjoyed this one..especially how you ended it.

  6. Happily surprised at the haiku. Everything is in it.

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