haiku

Posted on July 4, 2020 by joem18b

male lark’s strong ascent
falcon’s descent the fastest
creaky, i go slow

for Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix

Filed under: Haiku, writing challenges, writing prompts | Tagged: , , , |

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  1. revivedwriter, on July 5, 2020 at 10:35 am said:

    Good use of antithesis! I like how you include lark, falcon, and an observer.

    Reply

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