haiku

Posted on June 20, 2020 by joem18b

two fawns in the woods
step into the clearing light
our moms were young once

for The Sunday Muse

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12 Responses

  1. Beverly Crawford, on June 20, 2020 at 11:43 am said:

    A beautiful haiku.

    Reply
  2. fireblossom32, on June 20, 2020 at 12:13 pm said:

    Thanks for being part of the Muse this week.

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  3. Helen Dehner, on June 20, 2020 at 12:57 pm said:

    Ah, yes ….

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  4. Carrie V. H., on June 20, 2020 at 1:45 pm said:

    This is such a lovely Haiku!

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  5. Mary, on June 20, 2020 at 3:41 pm said:

    Yes, our moms were young once. So were we. We all age….something to think about. We cannot deny the inevitable.

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  6. wyndolynne, on June 21, 2020 at 4:39 am said:

    This made me smile 🙂

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  7. Sherry Marr, on June 21, 2020 at 9:35 am said:

    This is very lovely.

    Reply
  8. Susie Clevenger, on June 22, 2020 at 2:25 pm said:

    Beautiful

    Reply
  9. qbit, on June 23, 2020 at 5:15 pm said:

    Nice. Yes, great point.

    Reply

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