haiku

nature isn’t agile
plodding but subsuming us
in its conundrums

for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday

2 Responses

  1. Thought inducing

  2. Good word choice in subsuming (which I had to look up). LOL! Definitely an excellent Senryu (because it is talking about a human’s reaction to nature). I like the philosophical nature of your poem!

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