me
one more
three of us
soon the world fills
up
my example of a lanterne
(1, 2, 3, 4, 1 syllables)
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me
one more
three of us
soon the world fills
up
my example of a lanterne
(1, 2, 3, 4, 1 syllables)
Filed under: Uncategorized | Tagged: Colleen's Weekly Tanka Tuesday, writing challenge |
Nice! This poem’s so true, and life will indeed go on.
Well done, Joe. I like the simplicity of this form. When you string a few of these together like verses (quatrains) its also impressive. Glad you gave it a go.
🙂
Wow! This is a real-life example.
I also wish to fill up a world.
Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Different.
Enjoyed the simple truth displayed in this, the world will continue to keep on filling up 🙂