all land air water
teemed with every sort of life
then the white man came
The family, the clan, the tribe, the nation. Humans are good at surviving, thriving, adapting, expanding, but only in cohesive groups. When group meets group, that’s another story.
for dVerse Poets Pubs Haibun Monday
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Does writing excuse watching? 
Nice haibun
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Powerful haiku.
thanks.
Yep. Teeming succumbs to teaming.
Seriously, it’s a powerful piece. Right to the point.
thanks. teeming succumbed to teeming teaming.
cheers.
Short and bang on; sharp haiku and painfully honest prose.
thanks! 🙂
Those groups can be dangerous to each other.
fatal to each other
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Yes, what a story, when groups meet: too often a horrifying one. You’ve written a brief yet powerful one!
thank you, Frank.
cheers.
Too sadly true.
yep. thanks for the visit. cheers.
Fear drives people to do the unthinkable.
yeah, it’s pretty much all thinkable at this point, up to and including the final unthinkables.
In the end we need to coexist
the humans as one tribe. not there yet.