Commissioned Piece (Untitled)
Used with Permission

the owl moved out
lights castles balloons low moon
too much going on

for Imaginary Garden

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15 Responses

  1. Ah, succinct and well said.

  2. There is always something going on but do we notice it?

  3. Way too much for Mr. Owl!

  4. I like your use of the word ‘balloons’ – very apt.

  5. Perfect!

  6. Well done haiku that captures the feeling of this art work.

  7. Night can be too intense if you watch it closely.

  8. So much in the too much Joem…

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