haiku

robin pulls out worm
in park grass daughter stares asks
mommy what’s that thing

for I Write Her Weekly Haiku Challenge

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6 Responses

  1. I love this, Joe! Check the syllable count on first line. I see 6.

  2. oops. good eye. thanks!

    Susi, could you do me a big favor? I have another little haiku post at https://joem18b.wordpress.com/2015/04/09/haikus-for-typetrigger/. could you check the syllable counts in that post. i know i’ve got a few there that are off. 🙂

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