
fathers and their sons
gliding through time and silent
transparent water
responding to Pic and a Word Challenge
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fathers and their sons
gliding through time and silent
transparent water
responding to Pic and a Word Challenge
Filed under: challenges, Haiku, writing | Tagged: fathers and sons, Haiku |
Lovely haiku! I especially liked the “silent and transparent water” – a good metaphor for how the human male can be.
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