A link to Drowning (A Story).
A link to this 100-Word Challenge.
Reminder: A critique doesn’t have to be negative, which is good, because I would not presume.
To the author: well done.
“Drowning” is an excellent 100-word story, assuming that it doesn’t bother you to read about someone going down in a plane and drowning.
A nit: “Aquamarine waters swallowed the aeroplane as it descended.” Would not the waters swallow the plane after it descended, not as it descended? Of course, once immersed, the plane must still descend to the bottom, to become a tourist snorkeling attraction once the bodies have been removed.
Also, a woman gets her neck wrung (she survives) and vases get broken, which might render the story inappropriate for younger readers.